Should gletz be used even once in the body of a poem, never mind four times? Isn't that a flaw? Or was that the whole point. Nevertheless, Thomas, don't ever do that again, or else.....
You decide:
The Diamond Cutter by Thomas Lux in Atlantic Online
SNOWY NIGHT
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Here is a winter hokku by Issa, this time needing no major changes:
夜の雪だまって通る人もありyoru no yuki damatte tôru hito mo arinight ‘s snow silently
passing people...
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