Should gletz be used even once in the body of a poem, never mind four times? Isn't that a flaw? Or was that the whole point. Nevertheless, Thomas, don't ever do that again, or else.....
You decide:
The Diamond Cutter by Thomas Lux in Atlantic Online
IF ONLY YOU CAN FIND IT
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Grasping a roseTo smell its fragrance —All the petals fall. I am not big on
rose hokku. Hokku is more a “dandelion” kind of verse, but this one just
happen...
2 weeks ago
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