grammar and syntax; on the other hand

This essay is poorly organized, with only one paragraph (though, to Mr. Shakespeare's credit, the topic sentence does speak to what the rest of the sentences in his one paragraph are about). It is riddled with errors in syntax, incomplete sentences being the most noticeable problem. Although his supporting sentences are vivid in their description, they are vague and general, not true examples.

The Princeton Review applying the College Board's SAT essay grading criteria to Shakespeare's "All the world's a stage" speech from As You Like It

Would Shakespeare Get Into Swarthmore? How several well-known writers (and the Unabomber) would fare on the new SAT by John Katzman, Andy Lutz and Erik Olson in the Atlantic Monthly