Real as a Ten-Dollar BillNow my question is this: is this a bad formalist poem or a bad postmodern poem. No cheating: just a bad poem is not an option.
George Washington invaded Lynn
while Alexander Hamilton
assumed the funding of its sin.
Its factories were overrun
with overseas commodities
but Jefferson’s soliloquies
impressed nobody and a nurse.
James Madison was adamant
about the power of the purse
yet overlooked the peppermint
potentials in his cup of tea.
We looked to Joltin’ Aaron Burr
to speak in strong pentameter;
he missed by just a single foot.
Gregory Perry 2004
COLD AND SOLITUDE
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Freezing weather here after a snowfall. Here again is a winter hokku by
Hashin: No sky, no earth;Only snowCeaselessly falling. And here is Kimio
Eto playin...
3 months ago
3 comments:
I thought it was funny. Whichever lens you look through, it's still funny.
Yes, as satire it is more like Pope...
Thanks Mark and Amardeep, because as we all know, meter is easy, but comedy, now that's hard.
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