Swam in the ocean today. The waves roughed me up good. Emmy lay in the sun today. The rays roughed her up good. We’re tired; good night.
AGING PERHAPS, BUT NEVER OLD
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I do not advocate making this kind of hokku a habit, because it tends to
perpetuate the notion of the verse form as a kind of flippant game.
Nonetheless, t...
5 days ago
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This reminded me so much of times past, that tired feeling after swimming in the Gulf, salty, sunburned, squinting, cobwebs in the head all blown out -- thanks for the memories.
(This is BethW from switched at birth -- I keep forgetting my blogger info. Guess I'll have to resort to writing it down!)
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