Swam in the ocean today. The waves roughed me up good. Emmy lay in the sun today. The rays roughed her up good. We’re tired; good night.
FROM RHYTHM TO STRESS IN HOKKU
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Most of you already know the notion that hokku is seventeen syllables
arranged in a 5/7/5 pattern is wrong. Many people were taught that in
modern haiku (b...
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This reminded me so much of times past, that tired feeling after swimming in the Gulf, salty, sunburned, squinting, cobwebs in the head all blown out -- thanks for the memories.
(This is BethW from switched at birth -- I keep forgetting my blogger info. Guess I'll have to resort to writing it down!)
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