A Loon; A Sea (part three)
Or maybe closer to the point
a sailboat tacks in winter gales
avoiding rocky spits of land
with tongue in cheek—and smiling sails.
No one of a sound mind cruises
in a time of ice and bruises.
SYLLABLES AND ESSENTIAL WORDS
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Those of you who are regular readers here already know that in hokku we do
not use a strict syllable count. Many writers of modern haiku still use a
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