A Loon; A Sea (part one)
It was an angry sea that day
but loons were laughing in its face
and poking at its eye, diving
to that deep and hidden place
where calmer waters fill the brain
with something from the zen of Maine.
SYLLABLES AND ESSENTIAL WORDS
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Those of you who are regular readers here already know that in hokku we do
not use a strict syllable count. Many writers of modern haiku still use a
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