The Great Salt Marsh
Between the island and the land lies marsh,
a desert ground of spartina and salt
water protected from indifferent harsh
terrains surrounding it. So by default
it's home to things that never stay too long
on land. The duck, mergansers, gulls or teal,
and other migratory shorebirds throng
to such a hydrologic commonweal
where all terrestrial authority
is balanced with salinity and flow.
Within that middle ground they're safe from sea,
secure from high society and show—
until late summer scores a hurricane
or autumn showers them with steel shot rain.
Ry Foote 2005
THERE AND GONE ….
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Here is an autumn hokku kindly shared by a reader in Japan: In a moment,It
no longer is —The rainbow. When we look at English poetry, it is common to
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2 comments:
That is nice. Using "hydrologic commonweal" is fantastic, my jaw dropped at that point!
Tom, glad you liked that. "Hydrologic commonweal" is one of those serendipitous moments that result from writing in meter and rhyme. I had "commonweal" and I needed a 4 syllable trochaic adjective. Thus, hydrologic came to mind. It's one of the reasons I like writing in meter. You never know.
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