Shipping Articles of FaithI know I will revisit this topic in another sonnet soon. This one went out to lunch on its own. I brown-bagged it on a metaphor or two.
It’s where the fabrication meets the road,
the shipping supervisor tells his hands
each end-of-month, his tongue caressing cheek.
The young ones conjure up assembly lines
or visions of some parcel underneath
an eighteen-wheeler while the driver puffs
profanities with country music twang
or civil Rush-insinuating slang.
But older ones (with spines that know the twist
and spin of commerce better than the way
they drive to work each day) will picture this:
a salesman promising deliverance
—vehicles that transport the very soul!—
although the road is out of his control.
FROM RHYTHM TO STRESS IN HOKKU
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Most of you already know the notion that hokku is seventeen syllables
arranged in a 5/7/5 pattern is wrong. Many people were taught that in
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i wish i had the technical knowledge of words that you do
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