Shipping Articles of FaithI know I will revisit this topic in another sonnet soon. This one went out to lunch on its own. I brown-bagged it on a metaphor or two.
It’s where the fabrication meets the road,
the shipping supervisor tells his hands
each end-of-month, his tongue caressing cheek.
The young ones conjure up assembly lines
or visions of some parcel underneath
an eighteen-wheeler while the driver puffs
profanities with country music twang
or civil Rush-insinuating slang.
But older ones (with spines that know the twist
and spin of commerce better than the way
they drive to work each day) will picture this:
a salesman promising deliverance
—vehicles that transport the very soul!—
although the road is out of his control.
CLEAR WATER
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I have mentioned this very simple summer hokku in at least two previous
postings, but never explained how or why it “works.” So here it is again,
re-transl...
2 weeks ago
1 comment:
i wish i had the technical knowledge of words that you do
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