Broth Without BreadL6 - replaced 'meals were made' with 'days devised'
He lived inside his soul
although four score and twenty
blackboards theorized
its nonexistence still
existed. Housework persisted,
days devised, but thrills
each day from Milky Way
to Virgo Stellar Stream
insisted on this dream.
~Greg Perry 2007
L9 - replaced 'that's their' with 'on this'
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