Stranded on the ShoreNot exactly a sonnet, still it’s more formal a poem than I’ve written in a while. There’s a consistent although slightly unconventional rhyme scheme throughout (AABBACCDDCEEFF), and the feel, to me, is quite formal. Maybe too. But I wanted to.
After the first spring rain, debris
is lifted off the recently
thawed riverbanks and slips downstream,
threading its course within the seam
of current passing out to sea.
I watch the waste of last year flash
before the fishing pier, the trash
from summer outings and the limbs
and branches stripped by storms, felled whims
from autumn gone without a splash.
A bottle bobs and circles by,
still capped. I can identify
nothing of note ensnared inside.
Still I trust it makes the tide.
ON INTO WINTER
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I had thought to end the autumn season with Kigin’s “shape of the wind”
hokku, but a reader in Japan then sent me a new verse that seemed quite
appropriate...
6 days ago

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