SNOWY NIGHT
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Here is a winter hokku by Issa, this time needing no major changes:
夜の雪だまって通る人もありyoru no yuki damatte tôru hito mo arinight ‘s snow silently
passing people...
6 hours ago
crushed, fermented, bottled, and cellared

2 comments:
Hi Greg. As is your signature, you keep a tight rhythm with your sentences, and in this bit of prose it really, really works.
There are lots of good images, but for me the "lone patches [of snow] where the sun couldn't reach" really conjured a vivid mental picture.
Always a pleasure to read your writing. By all means keep `em comin'! JB
Joe, Thanks for the encouragement.
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