COLD AND SOLITUDE
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Freezing weather here after a snowfall. Here again is a winter hokku by
Hashin: No sky, no earth;Only snowCeaselessly falling. And here is Kimio
Eto playin...
3 months ago
crushed, fermented, bottled, and cellared
2 comments:
Hi Greg. As is your signature, you keep a tight rhythm with your sentences, and in this bit of prose it really, really works.
There are lots of good images, but for me the "lone patches [of snow] where the sun couldn't reach" really conjured a vivid mental picture.
Always a pleasure to read your writing. By all means keep `em comin'! JB
Joe, Thanks for the encouragement.
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